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Notes on Brooklyn

Workshopped this today. Didn’t get written peer notes back, but the repeated response was, ”This didn’t make sense to me.” Really? Really? The one thing I ws with a narrative arc and everyone’s lost now? Is it truly that cryptic? What all should I explain? What does make sense?

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